Was really ok
Greatlly smooth
I think you had a problem in the timming and voice acting precidding the bigg gag
that would been a lot more funny it had a better timming, some acumulation of tension to the rythm that would give the apropiate contrast to that explosive gag
do'nt mind it looks like familly guy, many things are reinvented and done better. With a bit more on this one could be far better.
Also the character design could be a bit better.
I't looks like you got some animation skills, but try not to overdoo that take that uses teh character root to squash and strech, always. But great smoothness
keep on hardworking in flashes like this ; )
i hope to help someway